Shadow Puppet Patterns

Critique my quatern, please?
A quatern is:
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The poem:
When you’re a shadow, life’s a bore
You always hope for something more
As a puppet, you cannot move
You’ve lost ability to choose
So what is it that you live for?
When you’re a shadow, life’s a bore
A world which no one understands
Your lifestyle is what they command
In their footsteps, you trail behind
You think that you will lose your mind
When you’re a shadow, life’s a bore
You won’t be ignored anymore
Break the pattern that they follow
Control today and tomorrow
And because your life should be yours
When you’re a shadow, life’s a bore.
Thank you for looking =)
Very nice. I like how you have a very clear meaning to it. My least favorite part is the second stanza,but other than that very good job.