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Shadow Puppet Patterns

shadow puppet patterns
Critique my quatern, please?

A quatern is:

http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/p…

The poem:
When you’re a shadow, life’s a bore
You always hope for something more
As a puppet, you cannot move
You’ve lost ability to choose

So what is it that you live for?
When you’re a shadow, life’s a bore
A world which no one understands
Your lifestyle is what they command

In their footsteps, you trail behind
You think that you will lose your mind
When you’re a shadow, life’s a bore
You won’t be ignored anymore

Break the pattern that they follow
Control today and tomorrow
And because your life should be yours
When you’re a shadow, life’s a bore.

Thank you for looking =)

Very nice. I like how you have a very clear meaning to it. My least favorite part is the second stanza,but other than that very good job.

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